Finish That Story Lost Treasure

Finish that Story

WALT: to deconstruct the story.



  1. Complete each section of the template
  2. Write the ending for the Story


  1. Story that you read
School Journal Lost Treasure 
Title Lost Treasure 
Author Anahera Gildea 


  1. Characters
Character Personality Description Physical Description
Whi Obdeinet, Timid and Anxious. Nice.
Hoani Mean, Rude, Unpleasant. Crazy.
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  1. Setting
Setting Setting Description
Afternoon at the Orchid Tree. Windy, Raining and cold. 
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  1. Plot
Plot Point Description
Beginning It starts to rain but Hoani doesn’t want to give up.
Problem Beginning The rain is making it hard to dig and find the spoon.
Rising Action Hoani wants to go inside but he still wants to find the spoon.
Where has the story been left? Hoani is still at the orchid tree digging.
Predicted climax Hoani is still digging in the cold and wet rain.
Predicted Ending Hoani is still stuck in the  Freezing , Wet and windy rain, still digging next to the orchid tree.


  1. Finish off the story

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After Whi and his mum leave Hoani still digging next to the orchid tree they leave and then it starts to rain and Aunty pam is telling Hoani to go inside because of the rain and how it’s going to be Freezing cold  and windy but Hoani doesn’t listen. Instead he decides to continue digging in the dirt to find His Nana’s teaspoon, it starts to become really windy,  and Hoani still wants to stay so he can be a hero. Whi tells him that it’s Freezing and he should come inside but Hoani still wants to stay in the rain and dig. After a while Hoani decides to come inside. He is shivering and is Icy Cold, he sees something next to his Nana and then he is very shocked. :”The spoon you guys found when”? Whi tells Hoani that Aunty Pam and His Mum told a fib and that Nana found the spoon straight away and that it was never lost. Whi told Hoani that he got his Comeuppance and he shouldn’t have pranked him so much, Hoani says that he is very sorry for doing that and Whi forgives him.


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